Monday, January 30, 2012
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Anonymous
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Blogging on Writing , Influencers , Marketing Advice , Promise Brides , Reviews , S. Dionne Moore
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Tuesday, December 6, 2011
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12:14 AM
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Anonymous
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Author , Blogging on Writing , Pamela S Meyers , Promise Brides , S. Dionne Moore , video interview
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Follow Pam on Twitter @PamelaMeyers
Website: http://www.pamelasmeyers.com
Monday, November 28, 2011
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10:15 PM
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Anonymous
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A Shepherd's Song , Blogging on Writing , Marketing , Promise Brides , S. Dionne Moore , Sheepherding
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Follow her on Twitter: @sdionnemoore
Tell readers about your newest release:
I have two this month, which is really exciting! Promise Brides, my first 3n1 historical, is available EVERYWHERE (rather than just the Heartsong Presents book club). A Shepherd’s Song is available through Barbour Publishings, Heartsong Presents Bookclub. A Shepherd’s Song is the first book in a new historical romance series set in Wyoming.


Love never comes without sacrifice.
Promise of Tomorrow
Alaina Morrison loves Jack Kelly. So why won t he realize that all she wants is to get married and begin their new life together? She doesn t need a large home or new clothes or other things. She only needs him to actually spend time with her and to show how much he loves her. As dangerous floodwaters threaten their home of Johnstown, Pennsylvania, will Alaina and Jack allow God to bridge their growing differences with His unifying love?
Promise of Yesterday
Escaping the horrors of slavery, Chester Jones returns home after many years. After meeting the enigmatic Marylu, sparks fly as he gently pushes his way into her heart. As love blossoms, secrets from Marylu's past arise, causing her to question her newfound feelings. And then what about those rumors linking Chester to a murder. . .? Will Marylu allow God to heal her heart or will it be shattered again?
Promise of Time
Ellie Lester sees time stretching endlessly after the death of her husband in the war. She manages to find some purpose in helping slaves escape through the Underground Railroad. When her husband's cousin arrives, however, time seems to stand still. Is her heart awakening to something new? Theodore Lester is determined to reach his cousin's widow in the North with the truth of her husband's death, even if he must flee from the Confederate Army. Seeing her again sparks something in his heart and makes him want to stop running. But he can t escape from his dreams. . .or himself.
Tuesday, September 20, 2011
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12:03 AM
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Anonymous
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Agents , Blogging on Writing , Conference tips , editors , Interview Tips , S. Dionne Moore
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Monday, August 29, 2011
Tuesday, August 23, 2011
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12:03 AM
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Anonymous
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Agents , Blogging on Writing , contest Judges , editors , Fiction characters , Writer's Digest , Writing Tips
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Teaser: Literary Reps vent about their Chapter 1 turn-offs.
Ask any literary agent what they’re looking for in a novel’s first chapter and they’ll all say the same thing: “Good writing that hooks me in.” Agents appreciate the same elements of good writing that readers do. They want action; they want compelling characters and a reason to read on; they want to feel an immediate connection with your writing.
But what about all those things they don’t want to see? Obvious mistakes such as grammatical errors and awkward writing aside, writers need to be conscious of Chapter 1 clichés and typical agent pet peeves—either of which can get a rejection letter sent your way.
Here, dozens of established literary agents vent about everything they can’t stand to see in your all-important first chapter.
PROLOGUES
“Most agents hate prologues. Just make the first chapter relevant and well written.”
— Andrea Brown, Andrea Brown Literary Agency
“Prologues are usually a lazy way to give back-story chunks to the reader and can be handled with more finesse throughout the story. Damn the prologue, full speed ahead!”
— Laurie McLean, Larsen-Pomada Literary Agents
DESCRIPTION
“I dislike endless ‘laundry list’ character descriptions. For example: ‘She had eyes the color of a summer sky and long blonde hair that fell in ringlets past her shoulders. Her petite nose was the perfect size for her heart-shaped face. Her azure dress—with the empire waist and long, tight sleeves—sported tiny pearl buttons down the bodice. Ivory lace peeked out of the hem in front, blah, blah.’ Who cares! Work it into the story.”
— Laurie McLean, Larsen-Pomada Literary Agents
The article continues here: http://tinyurl.com/3deuptb
Monday, August 15, 2011
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12:00 AM
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Amber Holcomb
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Blogging on Writing , poetry
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And I think a lot of you who read this blog are authors or hopeful authors. To that I say - woohoo! I fit in that category, too (in the "hopeful" part...). ;)
But what I want to know is this: do you write anything else? I'm inclined to think that if we're writers in one capacity, we're probably writers in some other capacity. We write novels, but we also write blog posts, journal entries, poetry, articles, devotionals, etc.
Writing is a way of creatively expressing ourselves and sharing what's on our hearts with others. Yet we are not limited to only one form of writing! We can be informative through articles, uplifting through poetry, or spontaneous through blog posts.
Recently I was inspired to write a poem based on a church service. While I'm home from college we attend a Baptist church where several of the ladies (and sometimes a couple of children) wave and dance with flags during the time of worship/music. Here's what I came up with:
A guitar string hums in the sanctuary:
The note swirls in the stained glass light.
The first few flutter softly to the corners,
Choosing their wings before taking flight.
Plum purple and wispy white
Gently dip and lift by the window.
Bluegrass green and lemon yellow
Flow joyfully in the sunlit crescendo.
A lone lavender wing is sent high,
Floating on the edge of the scarlet carpet.
A little one flits from side to side,
Then picks royal robe, and blood red to match it.
One set of wings falls to the stairs,
Broken and spread apart on the dimly lit floor:
Waiting and praying for a guiding hand
To remind her how she was made to soar.
A single gold wing joins the dance,
With a unique rhythm and swing in her wave.
The fall and rise of the hopeful songs
Reflect the patterns the jeweled colors make.
Even when the music comes to a close,
And the bright and cheery wings are folded up tight,
They continue to hum across unseen meadows
With the freedom of their butterfly flight.
Questions: What do you think? Do you enjoy more than one form of writing? What are your thoughts on poetry?
Notice: If you're a poet or an artist in any fashion, I'm running a contest for a $10 Amazon.com gift card over at my personal blog! Click HERE to read the rules.
Tuesday, August 2, 2011
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5:11 AM
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Anonymous
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Blogging on Writing , Fitness , Health , Snacking , Work
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Tuesday, June 21, 2011
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12:05 AM
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Anonymous
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Agents , Blogging on Writing , editors , frustration , Poll , S. Dionne Moore , writing life
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Tuesday, July 20, 2010
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12:05 AM
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Anonymous
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Backstory , Blogging on Writing , S. Dionne Moore , The Borrowed Book , Writing Help
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July 20, 2010
Backstory is everything that has happened to your character/s before chapter one.
The problem with backstory is simple. It slows down the story before it ever has a chance to get started. It tells too much about the character. It gives away too many elements of the character that are critical to the story.
Think of it. How often do you meet a person and automatically know everything about them? You don't. You learn who the person is very slowly over a period of days, months, and sometimes years. Your story is the same way. Allow the reader to get to know the character slowly, through snippets. Backstory should be woven throughout the manuscript. Peppered in to give the story some spice at just the right time.
So why is it so easy for a writer to fall into the backstory chasm? Many times it’s because, subconsciously, you are trying to get a handle on who your character is, where they came from, and what kind of upbringing they had. You see, what you’re really doing in those first chapters is a character sketch!
You could also be struggling with where to start the story. I’ve often heard editors encourage a writer to cut the first chapter, or even the first two chapters, because after those chapters comes the *real* story. In other words, those first chapters are filled with backstory that is unnecessary to the *real* story. The same solution is applicable. But don't throw those chapters away, cut and paste them into another document and keep it. You will need to refer back to it throughout the writing of your manuscript.
Remember, a reader wants to be swept up and carried away to a different world with different characters, and they don’t want to wait until chapter two to get there. This is why it is up to you, as the writer, to find the perfect place in which to begin your character's journey.
Let's look at some examples of backstory within the first paragraph of the first chapter:
Example 1:
Belinda froze in place. Ever since she was six she knew this would happen. Her father had always warned her she should be careful on the prairies during thunderstorms. Tornadoes could occur at any moment. And they could kill. Just like the wedge shaped one that had killed her mother when she was six. And that’ s when she’d had the premonition. The one that told her she, too, would be killed by a tornado.
Example 2:
You picked a fine time to leave me, Lucille. Garrett Thompson flicked on his turn signal and wished the tune coming from his radio was the song with the same line, instead of his reality. His Lucille, however, was really called Lucy. She would have hated being called Lucille.
Garrett eased into the right lane ahead of a Mac truck going far too fast. He kept his eyes on the vehicle until he knew it would slow. His mind sifted back over the events that led up to Lucy’s goodbye. She wasn’t the prettiest girl in the county, but she sure was the smartest and the kindest, though her tantrum twenty minutes ago sure supplied evidence to the contrary.
Example 3:
Thimblewyeth was a young woman of fourteen. She enjoyed listening to westerns and old-time radio, despite being a child of the twenty-second century. Even her mother, steeped in her own generation of 2182, couldn’t understand Thimblewyeth’s delight in stories over a century old. But her father understood. He was tall and had a pot belly, but he listened to Thimblewyeth talk of cowboys and range wars as he worked on his aircar or tinkered with the programming on their robutler, who could never seem to get the morning coffee quite to her father’s taste.
Three very different examples. Are these, in your opinion, good starting points for the story. Why or why not? Which of these examples relies too heavily on backstory? What would you do to change these pieces to make them acceptable?
S. Dionne Moore is a multipublished author of both cozy mystery and historical romance. Find out more about her and her books at http://www.sdionnemoore.com.